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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED - Page 21 Icon_minitimeMon Aug 10, 2009 11:20 am

No worries anyways. They will be getting out of the van, I just can't stand when people go against their training, you see it in the movies all the time. It's maddening.

Realistically I don't think the RAID enforcers would leave their van but to keep the story rolling I'll have them get out and do their thing. I just wanted to establish a believable reason for their actions rather than just have them wander out without a care in the world into a situation that they have been prepared to deal with.

Books and movies are filled with guards who don't seem to have much common sense. Pete is one of them so he'll be running out to his demise pretty soon.
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So I have placed Stan in a prime position for an encounter and have used their own technology against them. I don't think the truck can be restarted and driven until 2:22 or something like that. This should be Shadow's cue to act, he has to get the enforcer before he seals himself in the back with Sean.
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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED - Page 21 Icon_minitimeMon Aug 10, 2009 8:30 pm

You guys can take over the RAID enforcers now. Pete's caught and Stan's in a vulnerable position so there is no real need for any opposition. It will be quicker and easier for the rest of you to just write your posts and finish off the enforcers in whatever way you think would suit your characters. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED - Page 21 Icon_minitimeMon Aug 10, 2009 11:30 pm

Jack you now decide the fate of the RAID enforcer, Stan and control the situation in the cab of the truck. In order, to keep the story running smoothly, you will have to write the struggle that will occur between Shadow and Stan. I am no longer operating the enforcers, so it is up to all the other writers whose characters are trying to free, Shawn, to now write what happens to the enforcers.

If you can please re-write you post in more of a story telling style and consider the actions of the RAID enforcer who would have been at the moment of Shadow's appearance planning on going into the back of the van through the door he just opened. Of course, he never made it, since Shadow beat him to the door.
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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED - Page 21 Icon_minitimeTue Aug 11, 2009 9:10 am

Nice work Lac, that kept everything moving rather smoothly Smile Now you just gotta unplug Demon and Kasai can jump in.
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That was sweet Kasai... Zoe is so kewl! Oh and Sin, good call with Frank holding off on calling Birkshire, that just would've stirred up a hornet's nest right now. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED - Page 21 Icon_minitimeWed Aug 12, 2009 8:36 am

Thanks! alien
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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED - Page 21 Icon_minitimeWed Aug 12, 2009 2:10 pm

By my estimation Tim is about sixty miles east of Bernhards Bay which is about 0:45 - 0:50 minutes. Does that sound about right?
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SOunds about right to me.
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Hope that post makes sense. Lemme know if it doesn't and I'll rework it to make it work.
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Makes sense to me. I think it is good to go. Which shore on you guys on so I can figure out which road to take. I would assume the south shore, which will work good Tim can speed through Rome.
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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED - Page 21 Icon_minitimeWed Aug 12, 2009 3:52 pm

We're on the oppoite shore from where MCB Oneida is located so I would say you need to take Rt 31. In fact, it's not too far fetched to say we came up near Lakeport area.
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Got it
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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED - Page 21 Icon_minitimeWed Aug 12, 2009 3:57 pm

How much time do you have? Or should I post latter and let you catch up tomorrow
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I'll be here for another 30 minutes and then back on tomorrow morning so what ever you decide is good with me, sugar.
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I did a boo-boo. Embarassed I put a post in 'Nothing is Forgotten' when it was a post for Alter Egos: OOC Chat. Could someone delete it for me? Thank you.
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Which post?
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Someone else must have already deleted it for me, it's not there. Thanks anyway.
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Twisted Evil I am lightning fast. Hee hee hee. Twisted Evil
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No problem
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So, don't rearrange the story for my sake. Just role play what the characters would do and assume now that Toril is off the grid.

The south side of the Lake is going to be crawling with Marines and they'll be combing the north as well looking for Toril. I imagine he is going to sleep for a looooooong time, and unless someone has a clairvoyant character I don't think he is going to be easily found, since they guy doesn't leave much of trail.

(I know he has no idea where the safe house is, it might be for the best)
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PostSubject: Re: Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED   Alter Egos: OOC Chat - ARCHIVED - Page 21 Icon_minitimeThu Aug 13, 2009 8:42 am

swats you a good one

Way to go, genius.

LOL

Just when the chance came to bring them all back together you go and pull something like that.

Laughing

Ah well....we'll have to make sure Toril meets up with the others as soon as he can. The others will keep an eye out for any news on his where abouts and as soon as possible will try to contact him to let him know where they are.

It's all good and throws a good twist in the story. I likes it!
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OK, I just re-read the post for Tim. Tim is heading north of Rt 13 towards Verona Beach but that puts him well away from Yelena and Cassius. They landed near Lakeport on the southside of the lake. So in a nutshell, he's headed AWAY from Yelena and Cassius.

I'll write a post to help clear up the confusion.
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Damn I can fix it if need be. I assumed they would move towards the east end of the lake. That is what I get for assuming
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LOL

you'll know exactly where they are in just a few minutes and you can adjust your post and possibly write another to work it all out.

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